雅思寫作爲什麼總跑題原因及對策都在這了

在雅思寫作考試中，很多考生因爲跑題，拿到一個低分。要知道圍繞中心來進行答題是基本的要求，作文跑題了，文筆再好也很難拿到高分。那麼雅思寫作爲什麼總跑題呢?接下來小編爲大家分析一原因及對策，一起來了解一下。

雅思寫作爲什麼總跑題 原因及對策都在這了

雅思寫作偏題原因：生詞

生詞，是考生審題出現偏差最普遍的問題。一方面，雅思考生越來越低齡化：很多考生年齡小，大多數詞彙量非常少，有的考生能夠認識的單詞甚至還不到1000個。另一方面，雅思的大作文考題尤其是學術類的，話題偏重於社會話題，語言偏書面化，因此有很多考生，其中不乏許多大學生，都會有此感慨：題目有單詞不認識啊。

▲對策

①積累話題核心詞

1.何謂“題幹核心詞”

雅思議論文題目雖多，但是會有一些出現頻率比較高的實意詞即爲：“題幹核心詞”。

2.學習“題幹核心詞”的方法

對於“題幹核心詞”的學習，建議考生從“寫作機經”入手，找出題幹中出現的實意詞並作積累。

●請看以下雅思真題：

1. International travel often leads people to have someprejudicesrather than broad-mind. What are the main reasons of this phenomenon? What do you think people can do to get better understanding of the countries they visit?

2. International travelsometimes makes people more prejudicedrather thanboard-minded. Give out reasons why it cannot bring benefits to those visitors. Do you have ways to improve people's understanding of the countries they visit?

上述兩道雅思真題雖然提問方式有所不同，但是題幹中核心詞是相同的，而且尤其是“prejudice”一詞是理解難度比較大的。因此，如果考生認真複習機經積累題幹中的實意詞，那麼，遇到生詞的機率就將大大降低。

②藉助連接詞

1.何謂“連接詞”

連接詞主要是表明“詞與詞”或“句與句”或“段與段”之間關係的詞。在題幹中出現比較多的，能夠幫助考生猜測詞義的是：表示比較、轉折、讓步、並列的連接詞。

2.學習“連接詞”的方法

建議考生可以按照連接詞所表示的不同邏輯分別記憶。

題目中出現頻率較多的連接詞有：

表示比較：in contrast， by comparison， similarly， while

表示轉折：however， on the other hand， nevertheless

表示讓步：although， despite， in spite of

表示並列：and

●請看以下雅思真題：

Many people believe that today there is a general increase inanti-social behaviorand lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

在這道雅思題目中，anti-social behavior是一個具有相當難度的詞。在考生詞彙面與量都不令人滿意的情況下，這個詞是很難理解的。當然，如果有的考生背過前綴的話，他也能理解這個詞。但是，事實是很少有考生會背前綴，因爲它太枯燥了。那麼，我們藉助並列連接詞“and”能否猜出這個生詞的意思呢?答案是肯定的。“lack of respect for others”表示對他人不尊重，是不利於社會和諧的行爲。那麼，和它並列的“antisocial behavior”呢?當然也是對社會不利的行爲了，也就是“反社會行爲”。

如何更好地利用模版來寫雅思作文

寫作屬於產出性技能(productive skills)，是大多數考生比較薄弱的環節。對於大多數考生而言，對書面英語的運用要真正達到飛灑自如，隨心所欲的境界，尚有相當差距。由於語言能力的限制，往往是有感沒法發出來——思想到位而語言不到位。有鑑於此，不少寫作老師對模版和套句的作用極爲推崇，認爲能短時間內令考生的表達“烏雞變鳳凰”。

我們不可否認模版和套句在順利通過雅思寫作考試所起的作用，但是部分雅思備考書籍和網站提供的所謂“高分寫作模版”能否令考生短期內迅速考取高分呢?答案是否定的。由於使用同一個模版，考生必然寫出千人一面的文章，令本已疲憊不堪的考官倍感厭倦，(考官可能因爲某一高分模版“噁心”好幾天呢)不少考生因此失分慘重，背上“雷同”、“剽竊”的黑鍋，甚至得零分。

那我們該怎樣正確利用模版呢?考生不應一字不漏照搬出版的寫作書這樣容易給考官判爲雷同，此外由於模版可能與自身水平不相匹配，往往給人“乞丐帶鑽石項鍊”的感覺。比較可取的方法是參考優秀模版的謀篇佈局，注意收集相關的其承轉合的佳句，然後根據自身的水平，組裝成“個性化”的模版，從而避免被判爲雷同。

詳細剖析雅思寫作範文：動物實驗

寫作題目

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel, but other people think that it is necessary for the development of science.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

考題解釋

有些人認爲把動物用於試驗目的很殘忍，但是另一些人卻認爲這對科學的發展是必要的。請討論這兩種觀點並給出自己的觀點。

關鍵詞

experimentation 實驗;試驗

cruel 殘忍的

考題分析

本題討論的話題是是否可以拿動物作試驗。考題中有兩種觀點，分別是支持和反對。因爲提問中有明確的“discuss both views”的指令，因此兩種觀點都必須討論到。最後的觀點可以採取折衷的方案，即動物是否可以用來試驗應該取決於試驗的性質或者動物的種類等。

類似考題

Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?

Aquariums and wildlife sanctuaries are seen as sources of education and entertainment for families. They are also essential to conduct life-saving research. However there is opposition to confining animals in this way. Discuss some of the arguments for and against the maintenance of zoos.

原創範文

A chimpanzee is perhaps the animal most closely related to humans; but instead of treating the animal with love and respect, we subject it to cruel and inhumane scientific and medical experiments to further human development. What a cruel fate for the unfortunate chimpanzee. Or perhaps, in life as in the jungle it is survival of the fittest, and so, as the most intelligent animal we are just exercising our right to dominate and use other animals as we wish.

For many people the issue of using animals for science is black and white; either very pro-animal rights, or very much in favour of using animals since we are the highest level creature. On the one hand, some people say that subjecting animals to pain and torture is truly barbaric; higher-level animals share with us feelings, thoughts and behaviors and so we should look after them and respect them. They may also feel that if we are so unsure about the effects of a drug for example then we should do further chemical testing before doing live and sometimes cruel animal testing.

Others, however, believe that we must use animals for the benefit of our own species (humans); to test drugs, cosmetics and new developments in science which will provide a safer and better lifestyle for us. Very few people are inherently cruel, but they still believe it is either them or us; it is better to test the drugs on a monkey rather than on a person.

Being cruel for the sake of being cruel and with no tangible results to show for it is definitely stepping over a boundary of acceptable behavior, but at other times if the benefits of the research are explicit, tangible and valuable then I feel that the research is justified.

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謀篇佈局

第一段

引言段，背景介紹並給出觀點

第一段裏作者先介紹了考題的背景。用黑猩猩(chimpanzee)和“適者生存”(survival of the fittest)的事例來證明人類正在爲了自身目的讓動物遭受痛苦。

第二段

主體段1，反對動物試驗的理由

本段首先承認在是否可以把動物用於科學試驗這個問題上存在明顯分歧，既有人支持也有人反對。隨後重點討論了反對動物試驗的理由：

理由一： barbaric

動物和人類一樣有情感、思想和行爲(feelings, thoughts and behaviors)，我們應該照顧它們尊重它們(look after them and respect them)。讓動物遭受痛苦和折磨是野蠻的行爲(truly barbaric)。

理由二： chemical testing

如果對藥物的療效不是很確定(unsure about the effects of a drug)，應該進一步進行化學試驗(do further chemical testing)，避免用動物進行殘忍的活體實驗。

第三段

主體段2，支持動物試驗的理由

在第三段中作者討論了另外一種觀點，即應該支持動物試驗。理由也有兩條：

理由一： safer and better lifestyle

動物試驗可以幫助人類測試藥物、化妝品等(test drugs, cosmetics)給人類帶來更安全和舒適的生活(safer and better lifestyle)。

理由二： better than testing on human

有些人覺得既然一定要用活體試驗，那麼用猴子做試驗總要比用人試驗要好(it is better to test the drugs on a monkey rather than on a person.)。

第四段

總結，並給出作者觀點

最後一段作者提出了自己的觀點，認爲如果是爲了殘忍而殘忍而且沒有任何效果，則絕對是超出了可接受行爲的範圍(stepping over a boundary of acceptable behavior)。但如果研究所帶來的利益是明顯、實際並且有價值的(explicit, tangible and valuable)，則這些試驗是合理的(the research is justified.)。

重點詞彙

subject … to…

使……屈從於……;使……遭受……

The inquiry found that the court had subjected them to unfair treatment.

inhumane

adj.殘忍的;不人道的

Conditions for prisoners were described as inhumane.

survival of the fittest

適者生存

“Survival of the fittest” is the result of natural selection.

in favour of

支持;贊成

He voted in favour of the bill because he wants to please the law makers.

torture

n.折磨;痛苦

Half of the prisoners died after torture and starvation.

barbaric

adj.野蠻的;粗野的

She found the idea of killing animals for pleasure barbaric.

species

n.物種;種類

Over a hundred species of insect are found in this area.

explicit

adj.外在的;清楚的

She was very explicit about what she thought was wrong with the plans.

boundary

n.邊界;分界線

The Ural mountains mark the boundary between Europe and Asia.

tangible

adj.切實的;實際的

Other tangible benefits include an increase in salary and shorter working hours.

justified

adj.有道理的;合理的

I accept that the criticism is completely justified.

inherently

adv.天性地;固有地

There's nothing inherently wrong with his ideas.

實用句型

以……爲目的 for the sake of …

在表達“爲了……(目的)而做……”這種概念時，可以用“for the sake of”來表達，相當於“because of...” 或“for the purpose of...”例如：

Let's not disagree for the sake of (= because of)a few pounds.

Let's say, just for the sake of argument/for argument's sake (= for the purpose of this discussion), that prices rise by 3 per cent this year.

You're only arguing for the sake of arguing (= because you like arguing).

此外，我們還可以用“for its own sake”用來表達類似的概念，例如：

I study for its own sake.

Don't use technology for its own sake. Use it when it's the best or the only way to provide information.

雅思寫作爲什麼總跑題 原因及對策都在這了